arcadeko
Illuminatius Overlordious
Hell I dunno
kcearl
I see deaf people
Im typing as im listening.....
i think the drums are a bit too dry to begin with...they sound fine when everything is in full swing..nice programming though
imo the vocals are the right style but there are a couple of small pitch issues on the final "you's" the first few times....its just a wavering that might be worth re-tracking (I never bother though lol)
Id also consider a reso filter on that bass synth or a little grit just to make it more distinct
the mix is really clean though and the levels and panning sound great to me
overall just a couple of tweaks and more compositional than mix so please ignore them if you want
i think the drums are a bit too dry to begin with...they sound fine when everything is in full swing..nice programming though
imo the vocals are the right style but there are a couple of small pitch issues on the final "you's" the first few times....its just a wavering that might be worth re-tracking (I never bother though lol)
Id also consider a reso filter on that bass synth or a little grit just to make it more distinct
the mix is really clean though and the levels and panning sound great to me
overall just a couple of tweaks and more compositional than mix so please ignore them if you want
FunkDaddy
New member
Vocals are way too far away...low in the mix and pretty heavily reverbed. Can't understand them. The melody sounds decent though.
The guitar riff is pretty cool but the tone you've dialed in doesn't really do it any favors, it sounds reverbed pretty heavily itself.
The drums get really boring.
I'd try to focus on getting everything sounding like it's somewhat in the same general space. You've got really tight drums and synths mixed with overly reverbed vox and guitars.
The guitar riff is pretty cool but the tone you've dialed in doesn't really do it any favors, it sounds reverbed pretty heavily itself.
The drums get really boring.
I'd try to focus on getting everything sounding like it's somewhat in the same general space. You've got really tight drums and synths mixed with overly reverbed vox and guitars.
DogmaticVox
Meh...
I don't mind the "back there" vocals so much. It's sounds like you're going for a Depeche Mode type sound.
My critiques:
Vocals - effects and everything are fine, but definitely off pitch in places and it detracts from the overall song. Pitch correct it or re-track and only do one phrase at a time or verse.
Bass - Totally agree with KC.
Guitar - Maybe ease up with the flanger on the guitar. When everything comes I can no longer hear the guitar, just the flange effect.
My critiques:
Vocals - effects and everything are fine, but definitely off pitch in places and it detracts from the overall song. Pitch correct it or re-track and only do one phrase at a time or verse.
Bass - Totally agree with KC.
Guitar - Maybe ease up with the flanger on the guitar. When everything comes I can no longer hear the guitar, just the flange effect.
arcadeko
Illuminatius Overlordious
I dunno what a reso filter is - is that resonance - like a phase shift?
Or a Low-Pass filter that cuts out the high-end? Or amp the low end frequencies?
kcearl
I see deaf people
resonance..sorry i was trying to be hip
like a moog filter..in fact not like a moog filter but in fact a moog filter!
if you dont have one i have the UAD one though you need the card
but there is a really cheap, like $25, one called moogo filter which is excellent for the price
FoulPhil
Well-known member
It all sounds very off and there is something that just doesn't click about it. It's not horrible or anything, but you probably need to start over from scratch unles you want some Tripped out sounding shit. Someone who's real high might think it's the best thing on earth.
