Opinons on the_snake..

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SSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO if it's finished post it I want to down load it & own it.
Can you post a link to somewhere with a 320 or better copy of it? Even a wave copy???
Please!
beneath the cloak of darkness a hat holds tin foil tight on the head
that fears the cosmic rays of governments and the stares of the dead
And that same darkeness cloaks the soul that had once been known to laugh
at the suggestions of obssessives and calls for slaughter of the fatted calf
But now his gaze is shoeward 'cept when raised to take a glimps
at the passing constabulary and big business' bureaucratic pimps
He fears the third i in the ipod that searches between the phones
and plants the seeds of corruption within the marrow in his bones.
 
No hat is Safe!

rayc said:
beneath the cloak of darkness a hat holds tin foil tight on the head
that fears the cosmic rays of governments and the stares of the dead
And that same darkeness cloaks the soul that had once been known to laugh
at the suggestions of obssessives and calls for slaughter of the fatted calf
But now his gaze is shoeward 'cept when raised to take a glimps
at the passing constabulary and big business' bureaucratic pimps
He fears the third i in the ipod that searches between the phones
and plants the seeds of corruption within the marrow in his bones.
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Nice RayC this yours?

yes no problems what so ever i will do, it has to pass thought the 1351 then i'll post up a good Version wav if you like..it will be on my Recordings page i'll put a reply here when . thanx for the comments! and great words.
 
Yeah, I tend to ramble don't I - the hat, claok & dark tripped me over an edge & I dribbled.
I look forward to the final.
 
no

rayc said:
Yeah, I tend to ramble don't I - the hat, claok & dark tripped me over an edge & I dribbled.
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Not at all, this is something i can't do myself, the little lyrics i come up with are not at all poetry, they tend to be me re-interpreting my own intelligible dribble.
my friend also can just "write" like this , when i try it sounds contrived. so i don't.

nice.
 
Xlr

XLR said:
yeah, kind of hypnotic. Good song and good vocal. The verb smears things too much IMO and reduces the expressive effect.
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I was doing alot of thinking about what you said , and in essence you are right then i started to review my process in this manner and i think it's a general problem i have, this however depressing is not that hard to fix in certain aspects as i have done this in the correct manner, it was very depressingly show up on a set of fairly cheap PC speakers.

so i must thank you for this, as i think you are spot on and this is a general problem i am having.

and am looking at addressing.

so thank you.
 
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