Ok, got another joint ft. the misses n lil bro

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'Tis OK. Nothing crazy, but OK. Something's missing...dunno what though.
 
You're entitled to the first amendment..Physicall the way you post feedback you should be a BEAST! but...but...but...
 
Hey, I'm only critquing from a neutral standpoint. And just you wait till I start recording soon...you WILL be calling me the beast.
Probably not but I can hope
 
As I said before youre entitled to the first amendment..I hope you DO become a beast because youre fam..Word........LOL I think Ive been hanging around Change too much lol, from the avatar to the words I say when I post. Word. :D
 
i am feelin this joint i can see it gettin better tho oh by the way another nice beat by u kt the god be sure to let us hear the finished product
 
i am feelin this joint i can see it gettin better tho oh by the way another nice beat by u kt the god be sure to let us hear the finished product

word were trying to finish her lp up. So far so good.
 
'Tis OK. Nothing crazy, but OK. Something's missing...dunno what though.

thats what im going for, to actually piss off the ears of producers. Im doing me far as keeping everything simplistic and half ass.
 
i hear bellssssss...!!! thats whats missin.....simple sells..just have some breakdowns..and have it thumpin...i hear bellsssssss ...tht whats missin..did i say that already...this is nice ..i think you should had the last verse tho and shorten it up a bit..remeber you showcasin wifey...or the middle verse...but it still turned out nice//3three verse was short...

keep doin big thing fam...imma have to work on a club banfer for you and the camp soon.. i got one in mind..just gotta make the beat fiya..
 
i hear bellssssss...!!! thats whats missin.....simple sells..just have some breakdowns..and have it thumpin...i hear bellsssssss ...tht whats missin..did i say that already...this is nice ..i think you should had the last verse tho and shorten it up a bit..remeber you showcasin wifey...or the middle verse...but it still turned out nice//3three verse was short...

keep doin big thing fam...imma have to work on a club banfer for you and the camp soon.. i got one in mind..just gotta make the beat fiya..

well this joint wasnt really towards her lp, it was just everyone chillin when i was making a beat and yall know i dislike rhyming to my own beats. Like i said not my cup of tea.
 
Man i thought this was tight regarless of it bein your beat or not.
Vocals were ILL. Beat was ILL. Specially on the chorus. Lovin that synth.

:cool:
 
Man i thought this was tight regarless of it bein your beat or not.
Vocals were ILL. Beat was ILL. Specially on the chorus. Lovin that synth.

:cool:

ohhh naw thats my beat, i just didnt add the usual voice tag. But yeah im one of those i think the beat is never done kind of dudes and my brother was like man leave the damn beat alone. Remembers he's the southern version of me:D. Yep..... so hahahaha doesnt it suck when you hear something to go with a beat and your brain plays the melody but the beat is just lacking that sound. It drives you mad hahahahahahahahahhaha yes!!!!!!!!!!!! global half beat TAKEOVER!

Ok im done now:cool:
 
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