Hi All,
I was just wondering if anyone out there was able to give me an honest opinion to an original song of mine. I write a lot of music, and play a lot to, but I don't actually get out and play much publicly. So I thought I would use this forum to see if there is any public interest in the type of music I play. It's a pretty average recording just in my loungeroom but it should give you a pretty good idea of my music, style and composition.
youtube.com/watch?v=lYYmG2JjeGY
Thankyou so much to anyone who takes the time to have a look and give me an opinion without trolling.
Yes it's a break up song, but its reflective of life in general too
THANKS!
Here are the lyrics as I know the recording quality isn't great. Please still listen though as I think melody is incredibly important in highlighting meaning in songs
You were my first love
You were my best friend
Promise I'd be there
until the very end
I'm turning the pages
Remembering places
Where we would go
When the world seemed to serious
For us
I'm starting to see now
We can't all be perfect
I'm sorry it took this long
To discover it
We live in the shadows
Of everyone's triumphs
I guess this time you and I
We're just left behind
Again
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we makes just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say goodbye
In a world full of violence
Where nobody smiles
You were the one thing on earth
That was good for me
And it's nobody's business
To measure our happiness
But on the scales you'd outweigh
The monsters in my mind
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we make's just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say goodbye
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we make's just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say
Did you and I
Really have to say goodbye?
I was just wondering if anyone out there was able to give me an honest opinion to an original song of mine. I write a lot of music, and play a lot to, but I don't actually get out and play much publicly. So I thought I would use this forum to see if there is any public interest in the type of music I play. It's a pretty average recording just in my loungeroom but it should give you a pretty good idea of my music, style and composition.
youtube.com/watch?v=lYYmG2JjeGY
Thankyou so much to anyone who takes the time to have a look and give me an opinion without trolling.
Yes it's a break up song, but its reflective of life in general too
THANKS!
Here are the lyrics as I know the recording quality isn't great. Please still listen though as I think melody is incredibly important in highlighting meaning in songs
You were my first love
You were my best friend
Promise I'd be there
until the very end
I'm turning the pages
Remembering places
Where we would go
When the world seemed to serious
For us
I'm starting to see now
We can't all be perfect
I'm sorry it took this long
To discover it
We live in the shadows
Of everyone's triumphs
I guess this time you and I
We're just left behind
Again
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we makes just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say goodbye
In a world full of violence
Where nobody smiles
You were the one thing on earth
That was good for me
And it's nobody's business
To measure our happiness
But on the scales you'd outweigh
The monsters in my mind
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we make's just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say goodbye
We can believe that life's so beautiful all the time
We can believe that every choice we make's just fine
We can be creatures of a fantasy gone wild
But you and I
Still had to say
Did you and I
Really have to say goodbye?
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