You're one of my favorites here. Vocals, very cool. I like the level on the vocal too...keep it up front.
No lyric critique b/c I haven't listened enough to be a decent judge, but it goes from kinda' verging on blues to almost jazz in some places, which I think is cool.
Things I'm hearing: It almost sounds like the mix is clipping on some of the kick/crashes, especially at the beginning...@:15, or maybe it's just the crashes doing something weird...I'm not sure, but it's not clean. Those distorted git licks...they're great, but a little low I think.
LOVE the verb on your voice. I don't really know how to describe this very well, but it sounds like something's wrong in the busier parts...the louder parts. Is it clipping??? Sorry man, I'm trying to articulate it, but I can't...it just sounds like it has no room for things like increases in volume (crashes, some vocal parts)...like the song is dynamic, but the mix won't let it get out. Fuck, I absolutely suck at this. Blame mixmkr for making me try, lol.
NICE TUNE!!!