I really like it. Cool song, very good vocal.
I have a few mix comments, which may or may not be useful:
I'd like to hear the voice more clearly. Turn it up a wee bit, but maybe also carve out a bit of space in the centre guitar with some gentle EQ?
(By the way, how have you tuned that middle guitar? It sounds really loose and cool, and the slight string buzz on the bottom string makes it sound almost sitar-like. Nice.)
The left-hand guitar is, to my ear, too far out to the side, and a bit exposed. I'd bring it in to about 3/4 Left, and maybe soften the sound a little. Try a touch of reverb maybe?
Other than that, very nice. I'm looking forward to hearing the next version.
Cheers
AB