Pretty good for an amateur video. Well sync'd and well performed.
I'd like to see some different camera angles- especially to differentiate between the indoor and outdoor settings. Also, some closeups of the drummer or bassist might be nice. Another thing that might help is to wear a very different outfit for each setting. You've (I'm assuming you're the singer) got different colors of shirt (I think), but it's still button-up long sleeve shirt and ball cap for each shot. Visually, it's kind of confusing.
Oh, and there's no need to always be holding and playing your guitar throughout the piece. Sometimes it's nice to see just you telling the story. On that note, I'd also ditch the sunglasses... the eyes are terribly emotive, and by blocking them, you can't communicate as effectively onscreen.
Other than that, it's a really pretty good recording and a really nice video. Congrats!
