Nice work man. Working on the computer is a true pain in the posterior when you start, but I think ultimately (once you get past the learning curve), it's much better AND easier and more predictable.
Anyway, I thought it was a pretty decent mix. The vocals are great, and they'd better be, eh? You've got more guts than I do... Hell, I was nervous enough just PLAYING on an Erland tune, lol.
Two things I'd try:
1. more verb on the sax...it kinda' jumps out a little too much in some places...Sam mentioned the end, I was thinking at the beginning. (btw-that's amazing considering you say you don't really play. I tried to play one once, and everything just sounded like a fart).
2. Bring the drums up and cut some highs on the snare.
Okay, I felt compelled to TRY to get all "mixish" on this since that's what the clinic is for, but mostly, I just enjoyed it, LOL.
I loved the swirling stuff at the end...distorted guits, distorted organ-ish thing...very cool