Vocal is mixed on top, words are easily understandable all the way through, and it's good writing to, I'm glad I can understand it.
The vocal seems fairly dry, and I think that's fantastic as you seek advice on the mix, now we can make real suggestion as to where the vocal might go ...
At 0:35, the word 'spoken' ... this is very good singing here, I know what you are doing here is very challenging for many singers, you are popping up into your headvoice and 'catching' a note, and then gently you vall back into your chestvoice.
I learn later you make an effective hook out of this for the entire song ... and you are doing that, it is effective.
The guitars are a little heavy on your voice at the first chorus ...
At 1:08, I'm very happy again with the vocal level ...
'bets in life worth taking' ... yup ...
'makin' , liking that again ...
Second chorus, vocal is generally stronger ...
This is a killer 'lil tune mon.
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Your initial vocal entrace is clear and strong, that's fantastic !
'spoken' ... excellent.
Yes, guitars are a little loud on first chorus. 'livin' excellent.
too many shoes ... oh yeah ...
'locks her door' , opportunity for a sound effect there ... slamming door IMHO ...
'makin' yes, good hook here ...
I like what you have done with the doubled vocal stereo left ... flanged ...
At 2:23, I would put this wierd backup on both sides and mix it at 10:15 ...
I think Dave should play this one.