You Never Know

[panoramical]

This is my third release...
It's a song that means alot to me, and it's very emotional. For me, it's one of those songs you play when you are angry, and strangely enough it relieves you. That's what it does to me and it's help me through various stages in my life...
Anyway, enough waffling from me...let me know how this is sounding. (Obviously not completed, there will be a full band version, but I don't have facilities to record that!)

http://www.soundclick.com/atlus - at the top of the page "You Never Know". Enjoy it!

Touching stories
Of the foolish men
Who thought he’d save their lives.

Grace and glory
Couldn’t save the world
From these manifesting lies.
These lies, these lies.

Why we’re stuck here
We will never know
But we’ll always wonder why.
Why, why.

Yeah…
Always dreaming of you.
Keeping a view
Of all my life.
All my life.

My mouth is open
But my hands are tied
Now where’s my bread and wine?

You’re life is taken
And you’ll never find
Some other peace of mind.
Of mind, of mind.

Why we’re stuck here
We will never know
But we’ll always wonder why.

Yeah…
Always dreaming of you.
Keeping a view
Of all my life.
All my life.

I won’t ever pray to you.
I won’t make a sound.

Yeah…
Always dreaming of you.
Always keeping a view
Of all my life.
All my life.
My life…
My life…

If the above link doesn't function:

Thanks!

 

[XLR]

Needs some fader-riding level control between the ac gtr and the vocal. Really good vocals but a few intonation problems here and there. The gtr's a little out of tune.

Tim

 

[panoramical]

Hi Tim,
Thanks for your suggestions. The recording is already improved!!

 

[panoramical]

To divert slightly, does anyone know any way I can get drums on this without knowing how to drum properly? I dont know any friends who are drummers, and I don't want to use a drum machine because of tempo change!