"Without you" premix track posted!

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Fat_Satchel

I suffer Narcoleptic Rage
For those who are interested and have been following this song along...thanks for all the input!! Some might notice thier suggestions have been used in some fashion...check it out.

Just follow the link...track is titled "Without you (My bottle of wine)" ...Im thinking Im gonna change the title to "My bottle of wine"...seems more fitting...

Let me know what ya think

Lemming Scream - Without you (My bottle of wine)
 
I get really frustrated with my ISP and with my ADD. I get lost staring at the keyboard and forget what I am doing at times, but I will try and give your song a listen this weekend. I don't think you should change the name and I understood (I think) where you were coming from with the "double meaning" approach. My only purpose or intent in responding to your lyrics was to try and help. I know from personal experience when lyrics come to close to the heart they can have unexpected effects on our ability to be objective.

Keep the faith.....Ozlee:)
 
Hiya ozlee...Ive got a crap connection too so I can relate. Appreciate ya takin the time though...Ive become quite fond of this song as its been coming together...

Have a good weekend
 
meh

its a good song and all...but the vocals are off key at some places.
 
I have just now downloaded, or rather I am in the process of it, your song. I have been busy with to many other things until now to check it out.

Ozlee
 
yea cheesehead...the vox tracks ya hear are the scratch tracks.

Im really getting frustrated with this song...Ive retracked the vox myself a couple times and they sucked (I truly cannot sing yet hehe) and a couple times with the with the guy that sings "Mother dear" (another song of mine posted) and it just isnt coming out right...closest thing Id say as to the problem is theres just no emotion to the vox...the err...delivery? isnt there.

everything else is done and sounds ok...and Im dyin to post the damned thing cuz I really want to move on to some other ideas Ive been generating.

Anyways...thanks alot for taking a listen and commenting...hopefully soon Ill have the final cut posted.
 
Sach,

I think you have hit the nail on the head about the vocals and emotion. I think that it is the type of song that needs a strong intense style and I think it should be a blues based style. You might should set it aside and come back to it latter. Your vocals could be a result of bieng to close to the material in a way that has drained your energy. If I can help let me know. Right now I don't have time to write anymore. But I would like to help if I can.

Keep the faith......Ozlee
 
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