Much preferred the first one. Everything seemed to just sit together better. The second sounded to be, not sure how to explain it, everything was separate. The first track I could imagine all the instruments being played in the same place, hope that makes sense haha.
Although I found the noise of the plectrum quite distracting throughout.
As a side note, how do you embed the SoundCloud file in your post like that? Mine always show as a link.