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tommy mas
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what people cant give feedback ?
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Well you may have shot yourself in the foot there but I listened anyway and liked the tune. It's got a witty start... the chick saying "I can't believe I paid tend dollars to see this" is hilarious. A good ensemble rap arrangement. Don't like the distorted bass that much though. Nice contrast with the flute ending, but it'd be better I think with a little bit of a fade on the last note.tommy mas said:
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jazzrich9
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couple things,
I do like it a lot, lots of creativity in the production, I'd like some more layering in your beats, and maybe a slightly different piano patch, this one is too pretty for the sample your using... I'd prefer something like a slightly beat upright, as it is it's a little too chaste... although, if you added a phat bass line under it something a little showier than than what's in there, it might make up the spread. The only other thing, is the two times you mute the piano, make it important, possibly mute the second half instead of the first part of the sample.
good stuff though. and the vox are well recorded and produced.
I do like it a lot, lots of creativity in the production, I'd like some more layering in your beats, and maybe a slightly different piano patch, this one is too pretty for the sample your using... I'd prefer something like a slightly beat upright, as it is it's a little too chaste... although, if you added a phat bass line under it something a little showier than than what's in there, it might make up the spread. The only other thing, is the two times you mute the piano, make it important, possibly mute the second half instead of the first part of the sample.
good stuff though. and the vox are well recorded and produced.
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Jack Real
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Hi
I like the song "You Don't Know" a lot. Good vocals and piano. The bass drum is distorted. I don't know if it's done on purpose or not but I would rather have it clean.
Nice work.
/Jack Real.
I like the song "You Don't Know" a lot. Good vocals and piano. The bass drum is distorted. I don't know if it's done on purpose or not but I would rather have it clean.
Nice work.
/Jack Real.
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tommy mas
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thanks
much appreciated
much appreciated
chrisharris
King of Bling
lmao...the last post before yours was 3 months ago...I think they've moved on.
I listened to "You Don't Know," and the mix sounds like it's distorting with every kickbeat. I don't think it's the kick sample...it's the rest of the mix when the kick hits.
...but since you probably finished that tune last summer, lol...
I listened to "You Don't Know," and the mix sounds like it's distorting with every kickbeat. I don't think it's the kick sample...it's the rest of the mix when the kick hits.
...but since you probably finished that tune last summer, lol...