what do you think of this?

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I listened to the first track. The drums are hardly audible and I think that's due to everything sounding mono. Panning the different tracks across the spectrum would improve the sound a lot, because everything sounds cluttered up in the middle and sometimes even distorts. I feel like there are some fluctuations in loudness too. Guitar playing is good.
 
I listened to Seperit... or whatever it was.

Nice feel to the song. Liked the clean guitar part.

I think the drums are really holding this back. It should have a real driving snare - the kind that you feel in your chest. The snare here is real weak. Cymbals were panned extremely wide. It was a little weird on headphones.

Distorted guitar probably had too much gain on it. It gives it a fizzy and indistinct tone. Some good lead playing.

For an instrumental, there weren't enough changes in it for me. It was sort of the same thing over and over for 5 minutes or so.
 
i listened to one and only...some vocals would really make this work...as it stands its a bit sparse..drums started loud then seemed to fade a bit..Id guess its a guitarist mixing it, best tip is to mix around the kick, then bass, then snare etc etc...and the guitar sounded a little out of tune during some of the chords, maybe intonation problems, maybe my ears?

nice little solo parts...in fact the tones here were way better than the rhythm tone which would sound better clean to me

a little muddy on my system...but overall the good basis for a song here and solid performance
 
Awesome!
Thanks for the comments guys
I'm working on them at the moment!
Will post the latest ones shortly!
 
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