wanted people's opinions on my songs

[traciiroxx]

Hey, I'm a college student, writing and recording out of a dorm room. I am a guitar player, so any singing you hear is pretty bad, I hope you can look past that. I've written a few songs, and I wanted some outside opinions on how they were. Please bear in mind that these were recorded with very little equipment. You can download all my songs at http://traciiroxx.tripod.com/interest.htm

Thanks.

 

[bsanfordnyc]

Question: do your dorm mates often kick your ass or abuse you? i would if I lived near you and heard this

Didn't you post an identical thread a couple days ago? Several people responded. So did I. In the event you didn't see it...I'll reiterate...

To be blunt, your tunes REALLY suck. Everything about the 2 songs I heard was awful. Bad timing, bad lyrics, really bad singing, and bad songwriting. The only salvageable thing is your guitar playing skills.

Spend some time on this site learning more. take voice lessons or find a singer. And for pete's sake, don't ever subject another human to your songs at this point.

 

[EpiSGpl8r]

this is crap, i liked the solo in angel but this is shit. dude don't quit ur day job.