vocal and/or lyric asked

[sjonnie1]

Hi. I posted this song also on another forum, but here for different reasons.
I would like to find some who is inspired by the song on:

and who's willing to write a lyric and/or record a voice part over the song.

So the track is basically ready, but it needs a melody/lyric.

Hope someone is out there

 

[thebrontosaurus]

this is a really cool idea. i cant say i have a voice, but ill see if my roomate is up to it. good luck with other entries as well.

noah

 

[VSpaceBoy]

I was game..


till the chorus(?) when it reached to a land of indifference...

 

[sjonnie1]

Which means.....?

 

[zenpicker]

Agree that the song loses momentum. The synth percussion etc. distracts from the strong guitar playing rather than supporting it. Nice tune, good potential, but I'd say rethink the arrangement a bit and add a good lead line.