rob aylestone
Well-known member
A couple of things. Has something happened to your violin tuning? The first note should be a B, but throughout you seem to be playing a C? at the end off the first line, the 'The Sound' is a C sharp then a B. Remember this piece is in a harder key - and is not all piano white notes - so sometimes you are playing the C sharp as a C, and not going far enough down to play the B.
In the first bit where it says C-D-E-F you start on the D, then play E then an F. Then its a sort of G and a half.
Something has gone adrift here.
One other thing you can look at - slurs. Where there are two notes joined with a line underneath. These should be played as one - so you don't stop the bow, just change the fingers so there is no gap, Think of it as one note that changes in the middle not two separate ones. Hum it, and it makes sense. If you were singing 'Hello' - the two notes tied together would be the 'hel' and the 'lo' with the syllables being the notes. Or even more blurred, a two note 'aaaah' it just changes pitch - it would never be 'aah-aah'.
EDIT Raymond said this much better while I was typing.
In the first bit where it says C-D-E-F you start on the D, then play E then an F. Then its a sort of G and a half.
Something has gone adrift here.
One other thing you can look at - slurs. Where there are two notes joined with a line underneath. These should be played as one - so you don't stop the bow, just change the fingers so there is no gap, Think of it as one note that changes in the middle not two separate ones. Hum it, and it makes sense. If you were singing 'Hello' - the two notes tied together would be the 'hel' and the 'lo' with the syllables being the notes. Or even more blurred, a two note 'aaaah' it just changes pitch - it would never be 'aah-aah'.
EDIT Raymond said this much better while I was typing.