Unreleased stuff from hot sounds

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I'm think'n of doing a sort of unrelease compilation. These are songs from albums that never got finish due to lack of focus and dedication. There are other songs as well but these were the first I was grab quickly. Me and my camp no longer work with these cats. You be the judge. You think they should have stuck it out cause they got talent or they already had a mountain to climb. Get at Me!

Off the hook( I produced)

hifi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/57675

lofi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/57675

N@#gga What ( produced by production team member Short Daga)

hifi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/57682

lofi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/57682


We the soldiers of Da streets ( I produced)
hifi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/57684

Lofi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/57684
 
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good stuff u got going on there.

Off The Hook - too much overall reverb on that track. chick is pretty good. but u can tell she wasn't well rehearsed. not bad at all though. her voice kinda reminds me of N Tyce

N@#gga What - tight beat , u cant go wrong with Mohagany drums. Lyrically dude is ok. Not whack at all, just not memorable (but then again neither am i which ya'll shall soon discover)


We the soldiers of Da streets - i like everything about this one. the piano and the string sample are killin it. the chorus is hot too
 
Just checked you site kid. What apart of south florida are you from? Nice stuff. Represent dat dirty. I'm from miami.
 
okay

the first track is hot, she is coming with some ill lyrics and a nice style of delivery. i don't care to much for the echo, it sounds too metalic. waves delay would sound better on that.

the second joint has hot production as well as the first track. i think someone else stacking thier vocals on his chorus would comppiment it. overall it is dope

we soldiers is an underground gully flow laced over some black phantom of the opera ish. i like this.


there is definitely a lot of talent floatin around here. how many tracks till your lp is out?
 
Well I have 8 done and 5 to go. That's why I haven't been really as talkative during our colab because I am currently working on my LP. I'm basically (along with another label mate) putting this REcord label on my back. Now that I have help from a new partner I can concentrate on getting my LP mixed and finished. Sorry to ramble on after answering your question but that's how I am when I talk about my love. My deadline is june so I got get things popin
 
do your thing

that's what i'm talkin about. handle your business. keep up the good work. when it comes to results, i never consider it rambling.
 
Ft. Lauderdale, just north of u i guess. The songs @mp3.com are old. the newest ones are from july 4 2001
 
Not to far north cause I'm from liberty city. Haven't been to florida in bout 2 years. My pops and family stilll live there in the dirty.
 
sorry, sounds like every other rapper... nothing remarkable
 
what the f*&(

originally posted by jadionmusic
sorry, sounds like every other rapper... nothing remarkable
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you could have just kept quiet if you were gonna say something like that. "sounds like every other rapper" what kind of bullsh*& is that? that's too damn broad man. you sound like every other hater.
 
HATER??

Since I gave a very brief critique last time and I was called a "HATER", I will offer my professional critique so nobody else (jugalo) gets pissed.

The first track is decent, the crash cymbals are too prevalent, and the vocals are thin. They need EQ'd . The rapper is better than the two other guys, but she does not have a dynamic voice. Her frequency range is very limited, therefore inspiring listener fatigue about halfway through. The lyrics are a mild twist of a hundred other rap tracks.

The second song is ok, the rapper again hasn't the dynamics necessary to be solo. The dialect of a successful rapper is that which the vowels and pronunciation are equal throughout the song ie= everytime Eminem or Ludacris or Nas or Jay Z make sounds like OW as in Lounge, or Sounds, or Towns.... the anunciation and attenuation of those speech patterns are identical... making for a vocal pattern that could almost mimic an instrument in it's fluidity. Same for the third song.

And furthermore... I would like to make the point of talented lyricists... Filler words like Nigga are used all too often in lieu of more articulate words (even by my own artists). Eminem never says that. I say never, it may not be because I am trying to think of a line and I can't think of one. So a word of advice..... dialect, speech patterns and anunciation are what make a great rapper..... ARTICULATION is what makes a legendary rapper.

Professional enough this time?
 
yo

that's what i'm talkin about jadion. welcome aboard man. most people would have gotten into a pissin contest. they would have let thier pride cloud thier mind. you took the high road. i appreciate that truly. i'm no one but an aspiring artist like everyone else on here. thanks for being understanding
 
No problem, glad we are cool!! lol Listen I NEVER try to intentionally be disrespectful to ANYONE who has taken the time to put their stuff on here, because if nothing more, it makes them serious and moderately dedicated. So, while EVERYONE can improve... it takes critique by people more advanced to really give an artist that driving force to get better.
 
Well Jarion if you read my post thoroughly those guys are no longer on the label. And some of the reason you stated is partly why. Secondly I posted a question and greatfully you answered it in your second post so thanks. I have more label mates that are more inspiring than these includiing myself so if you ever get the chance check me out at


http://chalin.dmusic.com

This is my stuff. Don't want you to go away with a bad taste in your mouth so this is to make up for it.

One
 
sweet

sweet as review, damn jadion. you came with the review player. that was a hot one to read. shows that you are very intellectual, and have been studying the art and craft of music very deeply. there are a lot of talented artists who are apart of this forum like myself, who really appreciate feed back that we can build off of
 
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