"Unemployed American" New song critique!

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pewterbird99

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Hey guys I just wrote another new song that I wanted to get some opinions on. You can listen to it at www.myspace.com/danielsmithrock it's called "Unemployed American". I'm actually unemployed so it's got a bit of personal inspiration in it. The lyrics are meant to be more "tongue and cheek" and sarcastic. For the song writing itself I went for a somewhat "theatrical" feel. It fit well with the lyrics. Anyway let me know what you guys think.
 
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