Tripped Out Rock Song (Need Critique)

[PokerDude422]

So here is a track I just recorded for a band and I was just looking for some feedback as far as the mix and everything goes, if anyone has any comments or anything that can help it out to make it stronger let me know

 

[Vaquero Verbal]

Hi,
Nice and funny tune

The mix has gone wild, as far as I hear for now is that the guitars are WAY too bright. They mask everything else and I cant tell anything about the recording itself.

Drums seem to be overcompressed and the kick isn´t going to win the fight against the bassguitar
Vocals are good.

I tryed to fix the mix a little bit.
HERE

Dirk

 

[zazz]

wow...this is s real epic.....quite impressive..

when i played it i thought the bass sounded a little apolegetic in places...i also thought the drums and bass were not as tight as they could be for this kind of stuff.. but it was quite hard to hear exactly what was going on down there.

i thought the whole thing sounded overcompressed....but i know there is a lot going on in there but i think you could get drums and bass more defined..

also as a whole it has a slighty wooly sound ..lacking that higher end bite and dynamic.

with there being so much going on it would be hard to really be more specific but i would start by using less compression.

dont get me wrong tho...i like it !!