Tips/Feedback on song?

[enferno]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/befallenmusic.htm

any tips that you guys can give me?
just recorded it today.

 

[bennychico11]

post this in the MP3 forum section...that's what it's for

 

[mestdude]

I dont like the style of music u have going on....ummm i think u need a new set up, buy the delta 44 sound card and a good mixer with four bus's..you gett better results.

 

[enferno]

i have a sacram us-122 audio port and a berhinger mx2004

i don't think i have too much room for improvement there