Sorry Muzza, perhaps it's just me or what I'm listening on, but I'm hearing a world of something that I don't like in there... No problems with the overall tone but I'm hearing some sort of filtering effect or something I can't quite describe - more evident in the moments when you're not strumming and holding a chord, which isn't very often.
Almost like there's a crappy vibrato effect run at a low level across the whole thing... perhaps it's just that I'm listening on a PC at work through little headphones...
What tuning are you using? Sounds open, and low... perhaps it's those low strings interacting with each other and wavering in pitch than I'm hearing... what guage strings - if you lower tuning and don't up the gauge to compensate it can sound a bit sloppy... just reaching for possibilities here, you understand!
And if you decided you want more mids in it, with a low slung tuning that I'm assuming you're using, don't be afraid to get the mic further up the fretboard, depending upon the guitar... I often go up around the 7th fret. Furthermore, for a strummed piece I would not, despite the other poster's recommendations, have the mic up close to the guitar... get it back - 15 inches at least...
Feel free to reject all this if no-one else agrees with me, but I'd be interested to hear what a few more people think as I'm wondering if I need to get my ears checked! Nice piece though Muzza...
Also, your signal chain seems too complex to me. Guitar / mic / preamp / recorder - seems like you have an extra element there, but I'm not familiar with any of the things you're using, alas, so perhaps I'm wrong.
