this may set some records....

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Pretty cool, dude.

A few personal obsevations:

The beginning ambience struck me as a bit sparse in places like it should have something in there to tie it together better.

Some of the transitions in the background stuff seemed a bit abrupt.

Some of the patches were a tab bright, and distracted from the narration.

The narrator did an excellent job. Very articulate, but not harsh.

I listened to the whole thing, and didn't feel the urge to go outside for a smoke. That's a good sign coming from a nicotine junky agnostic rocker like me.:D
 
Didn't get to church this morning, but i enjoyed all 11:34 that I could get of this...*****
 
Pretty cool - worth the download.

I like the way you punctuate the story with different synth sounds - it works well (my favorite's the keyboard run you did when Adam fell asleep). It was pretty interesting how you used that electric exciting sound after the bit about 'if you eat the fruit of the tree of knowledge of good and evil, you will surely die'. That tree has always been exciting and impossible to ignore. Anyway, the synth punctations made the story more interesting. I also really like the way the second creation story shifts up in energy with bass and beats - really good.

Not sure about the keys noodling for a while from about 4.23 - it sounds a bit out of keeping with what's come before. No big deal, of course.

Also not sure about you whacking 'seventh day' with reverb like you did with the other days - I thought it was a cool effect when it laced a simple statement on its own ('And that was the third day-y-y-y-y), but it sort of jumped out at me in an odd way in the case of the seventh day because the words 'seventh day' are in the middle of a sentence.

You must be pretty pleased about this turned out - that synth work took a *lot* of putting together. Good work, dude.

So, when's Exodus coming out? :D
 
deer mp3mkr,

I feel like I am at the Haydyn planetarium and the dinosaurs are coming out of the ocean and the lizards are taking their first steps and stuff. She's got a nice voice, is she hot? She sounds hot. Nice contrast to that bible reading would be if she's dressed in like lingerie when she's reading it like a domanatrix or something. Yeh!!!!!

Oh crap now I'm getting starcraft vibes like does this chick have a visor with on screen display over her left eye and like microchips and stuff implanted in her head



Anyway, this reminds me of my favorite passage: " Woe to you o earth and sea.. for the devil sends the beast with wrath because he knows the time is short. Let him who have understanding reckon the true number of the beast for it is a human number. It's number is six hundred and sixty six. "
 
tasteful.... i`d make her voice a little more big and awesome though. Nice rich backing.
 
mixmkr said:
This is straight out of the King James version ...
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Nope. I read along. Definitely not KJV. Sounds like NIV to me, though I don't have my NIV here to verify that. Beware of copyright infringement.

Nice, big sound. Overall very enjoyable IMO, notwithstanding the previous comments about harshness of the voice, etc. I like the concept.

I was LOL at the "deep sleep" part.
 
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