Hi Rick,
I like the song. I'm not too keen on the "big LA sound" production, but that's just personal tase.
Like the last poster said, I think you need to set the vocal in a bit more. Also, the drums seem very separated - the crash WAAAAYY over here, the toms WAAAYY over there. Perhaps bring them a bit closer together.
Cheers,
Mscmln.