The Whole Town Owes Me

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This is a Country song. PLEASE CRITIQES

THE WHOLE TOWN OWES ME
© 2004 Irwin Byron Abrigo


(chorus)
The whole town owes me
and I need some money
Got to get pay
cause they took it from me any way
Nothing left to say
they know they owe me
And I need some money, yeah


(verse 1)
I’ve been going to stations around the country
To fill up my tank and it total 198
I paid with two dollars and they told me they ain’t got no change
And that been going on for twenty odd years


The whole town owes me
and I need some money
Got to get pay
cause they took it from me any way
Nothing left to say
they know they owe me
And I need some money, yeah


(verse 2)
I’ve been going to supermarkets all around town
to buy some groceries and it total 191
I couldn’t of owe them a dime
so I leave some change behind
and that been going on since 1959


The whole town owes me
and I need some money
Got to get pay
cause they took it from me any way
Nothing left to say
they know they owe me
And I need some money, yeah


(bridge)
I woke up this morning
I didn’t had a dime
keep me remembering
all the change I Left behind
and the price 1999, one dime
1095 five dimes, 698
they never had change
2590 ten dimes
and that been going on since 1959


So nothing left to say
They know they owe me
and I been some money, yeah
Nothing left to say
they know they owe me
and I need some money
Nothing left to say
they know they owe me
and I need some money today


© 2004 Irwin Byron Abrigo
All rights reserved
 
The bridge is a little hard to follow. I'm not sure what most of those numbers mean. Are they years? Numbers of nickles and dimes? Original prices?

Other than that, it looks good. Interesting story.
 
Irwin abrigo said:
THE WHOLE TOWN OWES ME
© 2004 Irwin Byron Abrigo

© 2004 Irwin Byron Abrigo
All rights reserved
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lol priceless..i just hate guys like this...they come on here wanting a critique for something they "supposingly" already copyrighted....2 funny! :rolleyes:
 
I'm not very good at maths so I found it hard to follow. Also, I'm not sure about conversion rates and all that.
 
The whole town owes me

Hi VomitHatseve,

Thanks for reading my songlyrics.

What The bridge is saying --follow--The price $19.99 They owes me one dime ($00.1) or one cent from since 1959

I Hope you can follow now.

Thanks again

Irwin Abrigo
 
Markaholic said:
lol priceless..i just hate guys like this...they come on here wanting a critique for something they "supposingly" already copyrighted....2 funny! :rolleyes:
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Hi Mark,

How are you, I was hoping that you would have critique my song, but you did not. Any how I like guys like you who say what is on there mind.

Thank you so much for looking

Irwin Abrigo
 
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The whole Town Owes Me

Hi Monkey,

Thanks for the read, I appreciate your comments about the conversion rates and all that, But this is just a song do we have to go into all of that?.

I never though that the lyrics would have been so hard to follow.

Irwin Abrigo
 
ah country just plain out rocks. Its like that '16 tonnes' song. Numbers are hard on paper, easier when heard. Put some lapsteel in that baby!
 
TelePaul

Took a while before I rely but I know you will forgive me. Yes! this song is country and it sing kinda rock it sure as a little rock in it, And yes! again songs are easier when heard.

However I must say that I didn't know that in the US, 0.01 is a "penny", and That 0.10 is a "dime" . In Guyana a "penny" is 0.02 and a "dime "is 0.01, therefore I will to make some chances.

Thank you so much for your input on my song.

Irwin Abrigo
 
Financially, I'd say you're gonna do pretty poorly out of this song
 
Monkey Allen said:
Financially, I'd say you're gonna do pretty poorly out of this song
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maybe in the states! I guess nobody can avoid the fact that country music is purely an american thing
 
Markaholic said:
lol priceless..i just hate guys like this...they come on here wanting a critique for something they "supposingly" already copyrighted....2 funny! :rolleyes:
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hey man give him a break will ya? Either help him with his song or don't.
 
TelePaul said:
hey man give him a break will ya? Either help him with his song or don't.
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i chose the latter...because if its copyrighted..then whats our opinions gonna do?...if he changes it...hes gotta go and copyright it again...so its pointless to ask for a critique on something he supposingly already copyrighted. :rolleyes:
 
Markaholic said:
i chose the latter...because if its copyrighted..then whats our opinions gonna do?...if he changes it...hes gotta go and copyright it again...so its pointless to ask for a critique on something he supposingly already copyrighted. :rolleyes:
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How about for the b-sides and rarities? And if you choose the latter....maybe you should stop posting? Just a thought.
 
i did ....until you opened your mouth and dragged up my opinion you nazi.
 
Using the copyright symbol is something people often do without the material being copyrighted. If he didn´t want a critique he wouldn´t have posted it.
 
Don't fight...I get the eerie feeling that Irwin is not too far away in the shadows, grinning crazily
 
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