the Swan

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I was inspired to post this 2 year old song that I did for my ex-girlfriend.

It is my first, and so far only, foray into classical composition.


The song does change up a bit after the long intro so fast forward bnefore you close the window :)

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Just kidding. Werent most composers lunitics? I think they were... anyway Im not much for the keyboard sound. The vibrato is too wide/long or something. A few parts were interesting particulary the scary parts. I felt inclined to look behind me and make sure there was noone there. I know whats missing though..... Dynamics. Classical music thrives on dynamics. This is kind of flat as far as dynamics go. Also the transition are kind of rough. It seems like another song just peiced together. All in all its not bad. Its good to be able to create music. Normal life and normal people are extremely boring
 
That is a 1989 Casio keyboard.

And I don't play piano so........:)
 
your piano sound is good, but those strings sound terrible, like they came from a Casio or something :)

I'd say get rid of those strings completely and replace it with a decent sounding instrument...if nothing else overlap more piano where your string parts are. The pizzicato parts sound more like a koto than pizzicato strings :)

I agree with tjohnsons statement about dynamics.

The midpoint of the song...slow, low-pitched noise...not sure what it's supposed to be...wrap it up, losing interest quick...
 
Outlaws said:
That is a 1989 Casio keyboard.
Click to expand...

It's a very nice tune...
now you just need to re-track it with a better instrument :D
 
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