The snowman`s melting outside

[Ashtrey]

http://www.freewebs.com/ashymusic


I would really like to hear your comments on the last song I called "christmas melting."

I didn`t use so much time on it. My thoughts are that the lyric may come out as a bit judgmental, and the melody in the verse is too simple?

As for the mix I don`t know what to think, so if the snare has to much reverb or the base is too loud or stuff like that, feel free to shout it out!


Peter.

 

[melahide]

Hi Peter, is it?

I gave it a listen. First I didn´t know what to do with the song. The melody line in the verse was a little to .. to much for me . But then, as you came to the chorus, I thought: "Wow"... and the longer it ran, the better it was... specially in the end, when you lay the vocals over the other, is cool.

The quality of the recording is real good

 

[Ashtrey]

Thank you very much for the comment..

Peter it is.. Well, I trust your first impression. If it was a little too much of something in the verse I will maybe try to change something. Maybe a lot of people here turned of where you keeped on listening, and that`s not good.

 

[trader941]

Hi, this sounds pretty good.

I would reduce the bass a little bit, at least during the first verse. During the chorus it's at a pretty good level, although i'd still lower it a little bit. The transition to the solo was pretty nice, and the transition out was just as good. I would have that bass guitar do something at some point other than it's basic track.

Overall, good song, i like it

Keep on working

 

[Ashtrey]

Thanks trader. I will try to do something with the base-track as you said.. and perhaps I`ll change the lyric a bit, this was done pretty fast so...