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esull1985
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Whatsup? I just wrote this, tell me what you think, positive or negative. 
The Plans That You Make That You Know You Will Break
What's with all the plans that you make,
that you know you will break?
All this build up for what?
No climax, and you can't escape.
Stuck in the mud of you're own spit and shit.
You try on every size, and of course claim none fit.
Yet, you're clothed, and not naked.
I guess your mind is just probably split.
But that is not an excuse,
there's no room for the loose and confused.
You're either this, this, or that.
Or you're heads final thought is that of a noose.
I'll tell you why I do it...
I keep tellin myself that somethings comin,
and I try to buy stuff that doesn't cost money. And..
I search for the paths that do not exist,
'cause death or life, life or death, there's no exits.
Yeah, it's kinda funny.
I guess I'm just...
I'm shallowly self-aware so I can play my flaws down,
but the truth is that I don't know one thing about myself.
I guess so.
The Plans That You Make That You Know You Will Break
What's with all the plans that you make,
that you know you will break?
All this build up for what?
No climax, and you can't escape.
Stuck in the mud of you're own spit and shit.
You try on every size, and of course claim none fit.
Yet, you're clothed, and not naked.
I guess your mind is just probably split.
But that is not an excuse,
there's no room for the loose and confused.
You're either this, this, or that.
Or you're heads final thought is that of a noose.
I'll tell you why I do it...
I keep tellin myself that somethings comin,
and I try to buy stuff that doesn't cost money. And..
I search for the paths that do not exist,
'cause death or life, life or death, there's no exits.
Yeah, it's kinda funny.
I guess I'm just...
I'm shallowly self-aware so I can play my flaws down,
but the truth is that I don't know one thing about myself.
I guess so.