The most meaningful song I have written so far.

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Nice - chorus is very very catchy... Mix sounds good to me, I was captivated by the words and music. Great work.! :D:D:D:D
 
I'd ease up on the autotune, and read the threads in the Drum forum about realistic drum programming - they sound a little awkward.
Also the arrangement is a little bland. Song kinda just starts, chugs along for a few, and stumbles to a stop.
 
Thank you both for the input. I'm fairly new to drum programming, as recording drums in an apartment would be impossible to do with out stirring up some commotion from the neighbors, but I will look in to using the software more effectively. As for auto tune, I can assure you that none was used. Melodyne was used very very lightly, but I don't consider that auto tune. And the arrangement is a little weird. I was going for out of the ordinary, so hopefully that didn't screw it up? Anyways, thanks again for the input! It helps a lot.
 
And the arrangement is a little weird. I was going for out of the ordinary, so hopefully that didn't screw it up?

I actually said "bland", not "weird". Bland is the opposite of weird. It could use a little "weird".
 
And I said weird, cause I don't see it as bland. But I created it, so I will see it differently. To each his own I guess.
 
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