The moon is a ball 'n' chain

[KonradG]

i just recorded this song with my band yesterday and i used these lyrics. i think they are my favorite, but then again, every time i think of something new its always my favorite, so here it is:
(I'm thinkin the name of the song should be "the moon is my ball 'n' chain" what do you think?)

(chorus in brackets)

Well its been too long
Too many nights
Since I could sleep
My eyes wide open
For way too long
way too long

But for the last few nights
These city lights are
Leaving thoughts that carry through
To the times I try to close my eyes

So I just take a walk around
Just a block or two
And I find myself right back to you
Right back to your place

And I think
[Its all inside
Everything I want
Is inside that door

But if I knock only once
Then I may never return
But its all inside]

Well I got two simple opportunities
To choose from but once I do
But you took back my keys I don’t feel like sayin please
So I just take my walk down passed the street lights
Into the nights touch the kind I never liked
Im just wastin time
Im just wastin time

Until the sun comes up
Its like a ball n chain
It keeps me far away
It keeps me kinda sane

[But its all inside
Everything I know is inside
But if I knock only once then I may never return
its all inside]

Its been too long
Too many nights
I come home with a message on the phone
You saw me standin below
Last night

 

[KonradG]

ok the name sank in way too bad, maybe it should be something more ungay
im critical of my words and i think the song is decent (with many revisions needed), but im trying to think of a name.