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Schwarzenyaeger
Formerly "Dog-In-Door"
I think that your voice could use more attitude. I'm just going to go out on a limb and say that you're an Eminem fan (that line at 1:08 was incredibly Slim Shady). This gave me the impression that you could try it with more grit and conviction.
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NotThatBright
New member
More cat songs.
dobro
Well-known member
The first voice doesn't convince, and the second voice is too dark. Also, if you're going to post your stuff on Youtube, come up with a different thing to look at for each song - you used the guy with the electric veins of windswept wonder on a previous tune.
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hhinterwebz
New member
next one will be about a turtle.
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NotThatBright
New member
You're going to ruin your whole legacy with this crazy turtle scheme. This is what happens with every artist... they forget what got them to the top. This ego of yours is out of control.
If it does turn out to be good, though, you'll be the man who turned his back on cats and broke the turtle sound. And that would make you a legend. You want to live forever? Make the turtle work.