jimi thang...
I'd have to agree with B.SABBATH, the musicianship (esp. the guitarwork) was god but this recording lacks life..its pretty dull...
The drum sound isn't really to my taste I'm sad to say..very 'small' sounding, the bass is hidden in the mix & the vocals are not 'in your face'...which this song needs...
I think you have the basis of a good version here...maybe look to add some punch to the recording...maybe some eq-ing might help, or re-doing the drum part..I dunno i'm pretty green at recording myself.
I liked the guitar though...there are some nice licks in there put I wasn't too keen on the effects on it..I think this songs would benefit for a straight distorted sound..