The dream is over

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I cant comment on the mix because I'm not good enough but I like the song alot, sounds really cool. Kinda got a Porcupine Tree vibe
 
Nice Job. Very dramatic.
Am I hearing autotuning on the vocals?
If so, did you mean to use it as an effect, or were you just trying to correct some pitchiness?
As an effect - total personal preference here - I didn't like it. Then again, I never do. You have a strong enough voice to carry the song without it, IMHO.
 
+ve: -I thought that was f'en great. Like the chorus.
-Interesting changes. Dramatic is cool. Like the changes throughout - tempo, volume, keys?.
-Also like the impressive overlays.
-In my limited exp. chorus a lot like Radiohead.
-Cool story.

-ve: -Finishes abruptly but leaves a noticeable little nasty click sound right at the end.
-Mettalic voice at beginning crackly because of the percussion crackly instrument.
 
I love the mix, wet piano, dry vocals... The drums scared the shit out of me when they came in - that's good. lol.

Vox are a little burried for my taste, but I love the 'colors' you chose for the chords and there is a good rhythmic groove to the song.

Keep up the good work!
 
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