mjbphotos
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To my ear the high hat is a little loud in the mix, and the vocal needs a little air (possibly backing the hi hat off would do it by itself). The harmony vocal is a little loud in a couple of places. The lead vocal could come up just a bit through most of the song, but maybe some air would fix that, too.
I really like it. Wondering if I should even post. Everyone's ears are a bit different, and at this point, I've got it as close as I think I can with my skills. It sounds much better than two years ago's version. 