Texas Girl new song in progress

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packrobottom

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Haven't written in awhile. thought I'd share. Todo list vocals in in last verse and outro. Replace drums with real drums.
Thoughts on arrangement, mix, song in general.

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(Abandoned song)

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I like the guitar sound on the left.

The piano on the right sounded a little cheap. I like that keyboard sound in the solo though.

Vocals sound good to me. They get buried just a little bit in spots.

The drums sounds, especially the snare, don't fit the rest of the song. The snare is almost techno. The cymbals get a little washy in spots.

Harmonica was unexpected, but a nice touch. Again just a little buried.
 
Cool tune.

It would be much better with ‘organic’ sounding drums.

And personally I’d love to hear a bit more guitar, it seems a little buried. But that’s just a matter of personal preference.
 
We could nit-pik sound forever lol... so, I won't go there. I recognize the "create as you go" feel to this anyway ;)
However, you could do a lot with the arrangement! Chop it up, make it less repetitive, add a rhythm and key change/solo, kill the music and punch out the VOX here and there...
You know you've got an interesting hook, time to "work it"!
:thumbs up:
 
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