Hip hop eh?...1st thing...I can understand what this guy is saying...10 points right away man...back ups could be "fatter"...layer those sobs man..make them "lush"...contrasts the piano part that is dry...Doubled that lead vocal in spots...good idea....song is ok...down low. I could use more bass!
please explain in detail as im still new to the whole recording thing and im still trying to read any and every internet site that will help me, but im glad you liked the song.