Hi Nick.
I love the preformance.
I have a few nits with the mix though.
First of I would try to get it to sound tighter.
just start with the Kick drum and snare, get it to sound powerfull, and level.
Then add the rest of the drum mikes-(tracks) then I usually add bass, and there if your succsessfull you`ll have a foundation.
Its usually wise to pan the kick sanre and bass guitar center.
Then add guitars, thats the way I do it anyways.
Then last vox, when it all is up, you probbabbly need to raise some tracks and lower others.
Btw the vox, are way to wet.
My sorta preset on vox is allways; Cut@100hz and then a little raise between 3000-5000 for prescence.
And increase on 200hz helps giving the voice some more body if needed.
Then I use a carefull amount of compression, (just play around with it).
Then lastly I add some verb, usually medium room for starters, with a blend\mix at 15%.
Anyways you probbably know all of this, or know better
But thats my 2cents.
Anyway my main thought on your mix, is get it a tad tighter
cheers buddy
Btw be carefull with the use of eq, and verb\delay it can really destroy a mix
