technodruggy - new song

[semidiablan]

Okay guys, I just got ProTools and a better mic...I'd like to get some opinions. The vocals are a little sloppy in some areas but I only made this today and I haven't polished the vocals yet. ANYWAY! Thanks for listening, please leave a comment.

lyrics for the portion:
"i'm stopping myself, i mean it
this weekend is the last.
i'm not moving, not evolving
this is a chemical induced loop.

i'm falling down the waves,
and living in the highs.
i'm stuck in this loop,
i'm believing my lies."

 

[semidiablan]

i cry now
*cry

 

[faderbug]

i tried twice but i can only play the first ten seconds of this file.

 

[faderbug]

oh! it started playing by itself now!!! funny

hey man, this threw me right back to 1982!!!

i think the kick sound should be a lot darker, not this clicky metal kick!
i don't think this has been mixed very well , it sounds like a collision of sounds and not a balanced mix.
all the ingredients are there though so have another look it.
good vocals btw- at least i like this vocal style - and the reverb you put on it seems to do the trick.

i think this is a cool tune, i tremendously dig the style and song.

a good starting point for a good song.

 

[Bulls Hit]

I like the vocals. The whole thing reminds me a bit of Manson...tune's got potential

 

[semidiablan]

Hmm collision of sounds...I guess I'll have to listen closely and see what you mean, I don't quite hear what you mean.

thanks, I've gotten a lot of awesome feedback on the vocals, which was the main thing I was wondering about. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll post again when I'm done.