Stax Brix - White Boy

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Whats hood? Just finished a ruff draft of "White Boy", Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve the mix. All feedback returned.

White Boy
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5085996&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5085996&q=hi
sumthin is wrong with this not sure if its eq or bad signal.
Life Of The Dammed
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5057853&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5057853&q=hi
 
so who's the white boy? stax? it was a hot beat but that chorus seemed like it was a little off beat at certain times overall i give it a 7 outta 10
 
yeah, probaly cuz I copyied and paste it.
I do the a ruff draft just to hear if it translate onto record. Sumtimes you write something and in ya head its raw then you rap it and ya like what the fuck was I thinking.
The other shit I do is I dont post any final mixdowns on the net keep all on my harddrive, If someone downloads a ruff draft I can still try to sell them the song later on.
 
thw vocals dont vibe right to me on the beat(ridin with the beat)...it sounds off..like you verse arent hittin on the snare hit or something..will listen a little later..
 
Can I be honest? I'ma be honest...

One of two things is happening here.

1. Dude didn't spit it how he wanted to, it's just a rough recording.

2. Dude can't flow, and he needs to step his game up in serious amounts.

Regardless of the fact you cut and pasted the hooks, the flow on the verses is off... he has ZERO emotion in his voice, and he just doesn't sound genuine at all. Like, I don't believe a word he's saying.

Now dirty, I don't know if that's you on the mic, or someone who's recording with you... I only figured you for a producer, so I don't know if it's you. Tell ya boy to step his game up. Then tell him if he's gonna spit it, spit it so people can feel it. Stop reading lyrics off of paper, and memorize the flow pattern so it's on point, and not choppy and half-hearted.
 
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you tell duke he needa step his game up on every aspect of his shit...

that music is nowhere near ready for distribution, i mean, its coo if you wanna get your hustle on with your music, but if you serious about your music, n want niggas to take you serious as an artist dont even drop that shit...

go at it hard for like a year n a half then ask somebody if its worth distribution...
 
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