Doug,
Nice sound! First I listened loud and then turned it down to get a sense of what it might sound like in the background of a film and all of the different instruments retain their clarity and character at the lower level. Nice balance of rhythm and musical moments.
This is an early mix of this tune. I have some things to do with panning, EQ, and some volume issues on a few parts, but for the most part, the song is well on its way. Comments appreciated.