Songs I Wrote

[BurnBarfield]

Hello, I found these lyrics lying around. Tell me what you think, please actually respond.

Heartbroken:
verse

Everyday I spent with you
is a day that I would never forget
after all this time
i thought we'd still be together
and i mean forever

chorus

until the dyay
that you broke my heart
and left me there
sulking in a corner
all I ever wanted
was a person to love
and i thought that i had found it in you

verse

after all we went through
i thought i couldn't be without you
then after you hurt me like you did
i can't even stand
to look in your gazing eyes again

chorus

bridge

do you remember
that night we sat under the stars
we looked into each others eyes
and you said that you loved me

chorus

outro

i believed that you loved me
i trusted you with my heart
and thought we'd never be apart
but now i wish i could
take it all back
because now i know
you never truly loved me

After All This Time:
Verse 1
after all this time
everyone would think
that i'd be over you
but how can i be over you,
when everytime i look at you
i fall back in love

chorus
i can't take it much longer
these feelings kindled up inside
and i have no idea
how i can express the feelings i have
what can i do
or what can i say
to win you back after all this time

verse 2
everyday i can't help
but to look back on all of our good times
and i wish i could
take back everything i said
if you ever gave me
another chance i'd make you want me too

chorus

Verse 3
whenever i think about the pain
the pain from losing you
i never would have thought it would be unending
i wish i could
tell you and show you
the way i've always felt

The One:
i never thought she'd be the one
then i got to know her like noone did
she was perfect in everyway
i used to think
i couldn't live with her in my life
but now i realized
i can't live without her

she's the one
that i can't live without
who's always on my mind
and can't stop thinking about
my life wouldn't be worth living
if i ever lost her...

who would have thought
i would love her soo much
every second i'm with her
it goes too fast
and time i'm not
it seems like eternity

she means everything to me
but for all i know
i could mean nothing to her
it's a miracle i found her
and another i got to know her
but it would take hand of god
to get her to feel
the way i do...

Bent and Bruised:
You hurt me so bad
And I regret that we met
You live and you learn
But you never forget

i'm bound to my past
and chained to the hurt
you left me alone
and i feel like dirt

now i'm saying goodbye
and i'm going to get through
this is me letting go
and i'm not waiting for you

you broke my heart
when you broke up with me
but now im with her
and now i know what
love is meant to be

if you are chained to your hurt
and bound to your past
then you need someone new
to make it last

then you will forget
and you'll say goodbye
to love that is untrue
and love that is a lie

cause when i said goodbye
and i let you go
i found true love
and now, now i know

bound and broken
bent and bruised
left here dying
i feel so used

but you are the one who's going
to lose in the end
cause i'm in love with my new girlfriend

now i'm saying goodbye
and i'm going to get through
this met letting go
and i't not waiting, i'm not waiting, i'm not waiting
for you

 

[Lawrence Bulloc]

Looks like you've got a good ear for lyrics. There are actually too many songs here all at once to respond in-depth to each one. Perhaps you could separate them, submit them one at a time? Sorry, but I just don't have the time to critique lyrics for ten songs....

But again, on first glance, they look solid, lyrically.