song revised let me know what you think

[soundboy]

Here it is I went back and switched it up so check it out and let me know what you think. Here is a before and after

FLO

Here is the revisionFlo revised

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[soundboy]

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[Barometer]

This is pretty cool soundboy. I'm listening to the revised version, sorry didn't hear the other. I like the rythms you've generated, this reminds me of mellow Herbie. I hope I'm not off here, but the sax and flute sounded a little roomy and it didn't quite match the rest for me. Otherwise it sounded great, the dynamics were definitely cool, nice work