Song for review

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Hi everyone,
Have a go at this tune...I'd like to hear your thought's

Thankx for your time

Garger
 
Oh man I really enjoyed that...very complete very tight...excellent mix...you don't say where you're located..naturally if I ventured Great Britain, you'd probably be from Bug Tussle..but it does have an brit feel...are you a band or an individual? What did you use to record?...this is some fun stuff, really....gibs
 
From what I can tell, it sounds great. It's hard to tell in this format. I'd love to hear it in a better quality format.
 
Thankx for taking the time!
here is a link to the mp3 file
http:/mediagraffiti.com/media/Diving.mp3
 
I.................Like it, made me wanna go swiming and the weather we've been having around here you really could, liked that tune dude!

David
 
Thankx Guyz,
I'm in Atlanta GA
It's just me on the tune
For recording I used:
Tascam 8 track cassette
Shure 57 mic
Lexicon LXP15 for FX
Ibanez S-series guitar/Rocktron Chameleon
Alesis QS6.1 keyboard
mapped the midi through Cakewalk

I have just gone digital and got a Pod for guitar...I like it, I think the guitar sounds to thin on this mix, but it's sounds much more beefy on my newest stuff. Recording on the Tascam was ok but not much headroom. I just got DSP FX 6.1...sounds as good as the Lexicon...amazing!
Thankx for giving me an ear.

Garger
 
Honestly....liked it alot overall, but thought the chorus was too repetitive..

Like..
Diving in the blue sea
(a)
Diving in the blue sea
(b)

I think the (a) and (b) lines should be different each time and be interesting and kinda goofy like the rest of the song. And maybe (a) and (b) should have different melodicly from each other (that staying the same each time through).

Again..overall very well done!!

Also, what equipment are you using?

-Bryce
 
Good song. Nice mix and production, and the vocals were very smooth. Was that a vocorder when the do do do do's come in?

Layth
 
Bryce:
Yea it's to repetitive, I agree...

Layth:
on the do do do's I used my voice, guitar playing the same part...muted and a synth sound playing the same part.

Thankx for the feedback!
 
The production was great. Very well done. I felt like I was back in high school. It seemed like the tune was distorting on the hits from 1:29 to 1:56. Other than that, sounds good.
 
Hah! Haven't heard a truly happy, catchy toon like that one for a while! Totally cool. Great mix. The entier thing sounded way more high-tech than an 8 track tape system. very pro sounding. So when is it going ot be on MTV?
Landon
 
"So when is it going ot be on MTV?"
I don't know...they said I'm in the rotation, but I hav'ent seen it yet, go figure?
Glad u liked it.

Garger
 
Could it be? Yes! It is Howard Jones reincarnated.
Love the song and style, keep up the great work.
 
Yes!...It is me...Howard "Garger" Jones.
Thankx for the reply!

Garger
 
Excellent, excellent, excellent -
Howard, yer an inspiration. :D
 
Not my favorite style of music, but I liked it very much. Too much, in fact.

I am intimidated and I will never post my stuff in this forum again! :D
 
jitteringjim...Glad I could be of service!

Brad...I thought Witch Way was very moody and had a certain air about it...WAIT!,
this is supposed to be about MY tune, oh well, please keep posting!

Garger
 
Hey Garger,
Thanks for the nice words about my song on YOUR thread!!

Dude, you must be doing some voodoo to get that rich sound using a cassette 8 track. I am very impressed with your stuff. As far as it being repetative, aren't pop songs kinda supposed to be that way?
You have a killer song there, my friend!
 
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