song critique

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neil55

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Hello,

Im looking for any comments, suggestions, criticisms, etc on this song I've been working on. Specifically I'm interested in comments on the singer, and the overall structure of the song. thanks for giving a listen.

 
mix is really low, drums are weak, guitars are weak also, i didnt really listen to much of it
 
When you say weak, what exactly do you mean? Poor musicianship? Poor recording? Or weak sounding in the overall mix?
 
Hi Neil,

It takes a bit long for the song to develop, and when it does it's just a louder version of the same. It's a nice groove, but it's a bit repetitive. None of the sounds (except maybe the drums) has any real crispness to it. The singer sounds like he's probably alright, and his voice fits the feel of the songs nicely.

I think there is some potential there, but you might want to add another part and try to work with the eq on the guitars a bit.

Hope this helps!

bigmahon
 
The drummer & bassist don't really seem well rehearsed.
The whole thing is a bit cotton wooly - not top end and a bit distant.
The singer struggles occasionally.
The guitar is really indistinct.
This might be a cool song if they jam on it a fair bit more & then re record it with some clarity.
 
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