Some judgement Please

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so far from what i see its lacking change, definition, and attention holding ability. it seems more like a loop than anything else. you need to schange it up make it longer. and keep refreshing the ear. after about 4- 8 bars the ear needs some refreshing not all dramatic but some kind of refreshing. its like when somebody keep talking bout the same stuf then every so often they say something different that catches yo attention so you star listening again but then after while its back to blah blah blah.
 
yeah. its extremely loopy. and the pause at the end of every 4 bars doesn't help . just add a layer or two more, make that the chorus and use what you have now as a verse portion. throw some changes and breakdowns in there and you're good
 
OK i spent last night playing around with it...its still without a bassline but tell me if it sounds better..
 
yo that whistle in there is hot!!!! i like the beat -- and i half way agree with beatmakers that some refreshin woujld help (me personally, i dont mind some beats that are "basic" loops . . . although i like em better when there are some "extras" thrown in within the 16 . . .

the beat is ok - that whistle is hot!!! -- i'd like to hear somethin like that some more!!
 
I would bring in the changes that you put in the track earlier. Most mc's, a&r's, beat battle judges, whoever, decide whether they like the beat in the first 20 seconds. So hit'em with everything up front, then go into the repetative part.
 
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