Well - underneath the general overcompression to the whole track, you've got this flangy, phasey sound happening on the cymbals (not a good thing), nor is there any real definition to anything but the guitars.
The toms have this nasty ringing that keeps jumping up during some of the fills, but otherwise they get really buried.
As well, you've got a few pops and clicks here and there.....
Not a bad effort, but also not pro-sounding by any stretch!