Single from my solo project

[shiatzu]

You're right Tim Lawler this is my first recording, and I share your thoughts as well, despite the song definitely having a Strokes feeling to it, it certainly is not intended as in plagiarism. However all the other guys who responded were just expressing their view on the song and I wasn't in anyway offended.

Shiatzu, the question is not about having or not Internet. It's about improving and if you don't show your songs to other people you will just be stuck in time.

i think i'm going to disagree on that one.. you can grow as a songwriter without showing your work to anyone. as you listen to and write more music you'll get a feel for what does and what doesn't work; regardless of outside influences. Pretty much if you practice something for long enough you'll get good at it, songwriting is no exception.

 

[lbanks]

I think the drums sounds a bit flat and compressed and I'd like to hear more bass. Vocal could be 'bigger'. Maybe some reverb.