Short pop/rock song, 2nd mix!

[Bassmusic808]

Hello. I've posted the latest version of the current song I am working on. Thanks for all the previous comments made in an earlier post. Hopefully it sounds better! The bridge is finished now also. The song is "Broken Promises" and can be found here..

http://www.myspace.com/thenonoboys

It should auto play when you go to that site..

It was recorded on the Yamaha 16G and mixed with Adobe Audition 1.5. Thanks again for the listen and comments.

Derrick

 

[tryptophan]

better than pro stuff i have heard (which is not much but still)

 

[Zed10R]

Hmmm.....constructively.....the bass and guitar sound is a bit muffled...almost as if the amps are covered with a thick blanket or something. The drums lack solid punch, low end, and sizzle. The vocals sound like they may be a little too up front. Maybe compress a bit (more?) and turn them down.

I though it was a cool song. I would personally work on opening up the guitar and bass sound, and getting a solid drum sound.

 

[Bassmusic808]

Thanks for the tips.. I'll see if I can eq the guitar and drums differently and see what I come up with.