Thabo Young Kid
New member
Ight guys so last year I wrote sum lyrics and never been able to go and record it but then now I got time I need to go to studio but before I do that I need some reviews. I'm gonna post my song ? so u guys should tell whether I should carry on /is there any changes that's need to be made?
TITLE: SHADOWS
{VERSE 1}
Well this is it, never thought it'd come to this|
Pills on ma night stand, bottled glued to ma fist|
some say it's the cowards way out, but this some scary shxt|
How'm I sposed to thrive? I can barely exist|
I wanna be sober. I can barely resist|
Put myself into comas, on a daily basis|
Just the aroma of that vodka n it's over. Gettin loaded|
I feel like mi headin' to death. mi just gettin there slower|
My Mental illness goes unnoticed|
They think I'm just a drunk,|
lost mi bitch, Lost mi shit|
look how they laughin' at mi/
Every time I think I hit rock bottom, I find more depth|
I dig deeper get myself caught up in more drama, more stress|
I work ma ass off for a cheque. Get no respect|
I ask for a little credit now I'm left with this debt|
Been in the shadows like a hermit now they're here to collect|
{HOOK}
I'm livin in these shadows, its so cold...
I'm slippin through the cracks, I'm so alone...
It's a never ending battle. I'm my own worst enemy...|
I choose to call the shadows my home|
{VERSE 2}
Already paid a small fortune, take the shirt off ma chest|
It's all I got left|
I'm all outta breath|
Tryna keep up with this rat race I'm all outta fxcks to give, so I welcome this death|
I'm just so tired. I welcome the rest|
I own these choices im making|
I'll hold them right down to my grave|
Make no mistake, I'm broke n torn|
Worn out n all out of faith|
Can't come to grips with all the pain|
I caused you, I lost you, n i am ashamed|
I promised you, I'd make you happy|
If that means taking my life away|
Two birds with one stone|
One lives, one dies|
This is what you want|
Don't grieve, don't cry|
I'm already gone|
Can't be saved, don't try|
Just know I love you so|
See you on the other side|
{HOOK}
I'm livin in these shadows, its so cold...
I'm slippin through the cracks, I'm so alone...
It's a never ending battle. I'm my own worst enemy...|
I choose to call the shadows my home|
TITLE: SHADOWS
{VERSE 1}
Well this is it, never thought it'd come to this|
Pills on ma night stand, bottled glued to ma fist|
some say it's the cowards way out, but this some scary shxt|
How'm I sposed to thrive? I can barely exist|
I wanna be sober. I can barely resist|
Put myself into comas, on a daily basis|
Just the aroma of that vodka n it's over. Gettin loaded|
I feel like mi headin' to death. mi just gettin there slower|
My Mental illness goes unnoticed|
They think I'm just a drunk,|
lost mi bitch, Lost mi shit|
look how they laughin' at mi/
Every time I think I hit rock bottom, I find more depth|
I dig deeper get myself caught up in more drama, more stress|
I work ma ass off for a cheque. Get no respect|
I ask for a little credit now I'm left with this debt|
Been in the shadows like a hermit now they're here to collect|
{HOOK}
I'm livin in these shadows, its so cold...
I'm slippin through the cracks, I'm so alone...
It's a never ending battle. I'm my own worst enemy...|
I choose to call the shadows my home|
{VERSE 2}
Already paid a small fortune, take the shirt off ma chest|
It's all I got left|
I'm all outta breath|
Tryna keep up with this rat race I'm all outta fxcks to give, so I welcome this death|
I'm just so tired. I welcome the rest|
I own these choices im making|
I'll hold them right down to my grave|
Make no mistake, I'm broke n torn|
Worn out n all out of faith|
Can't come to grips with all the pain|
I caused you, I lost you, n i am ashamed|
I promised you, I'd make you happy|
If that means taking my life away|
Two birds with one stone|
One lives, one dies|
This is what you want|
Don't grieve, don't cry|
I'm already gone|
Can't be saved, don't try|
Just know I love you so|
See you on the other side|
{HOOK}
I'm livin in these shadows, its so cold...
I'm slippin through the cracks, I'm so alone...
It's a never ending battle. I'm my own worst enemy...|
I choose to call the shadows my home|
