I only had chance to give it a quick listen as I'm in a bit of a hurry!
Upon first glance, it sounded nice overall.
The main thing that I feel I would alter is the distorted guitar sound. It sounds quite muddy, un-defined & bass heavy. Maybe a little scooped too.
This maybe the sound your going for, I really don't know, but some tips I've picked up along the way (For heavy distorted guitar tones) that I would be lost without.. They may help:
- Lay off the gain!! I find I only need about 50%/60% of the gain when recording that I’d use in a live situation. It seems to really benefit and gives so much more clarity.
- Leave space in the low end for the bass & kick to take care of! Don't go O.T.T on the guitar's low end!
- Plenty of mids.. A classic error is to scoop the mids to get a really heavy sound, but ultimately this will damage the clarity of the whole mix, especially if your layering numerous guitars in this fashion. Mids are essential!
I found that the kit sound worked well in the early and late stages of the song, but the kick drum got a little lost when the heavy distorted sound came in.
This may be helped if the guitars in this section are sorted out using the methods above... But the kick itself may need work too - The low-end punch seems fine, but a little boost to the highs may benefit in emphasising the 'click' and therefore, may help it to cut through a little better in this part of the song.
I'd personally alter the snare ever so slightly as well... Maybe try for a tad more of a 'snappy' and sharper sound.
Usually I’d achieve this by fiddling with extra compression & E.Q, but I have never worked with a drummer like the one on your track. He has some very detailed snare work in places with rim shots and the like... I'm not sure how heavier compression would work with these details.
If I had this mix at home, I'd slap on
a BBE Sonic Maximizer plug-in on the snare & boost the 'process' function to increase the high mid/high range until satisfied... Seems to have worked for me in the past, but I don't know if you have access to this plug-in?
Hope this helps a bit, the above is just thoughts on how I’d personally work with it! I really don't know if you or other people will share my ideas!
Good luck with it, you've got good foundations to work on!
James.